Showing posts with label 'A' Grade Exam Responses. Show all posts
Showing posts with label 'A' Grade Exam Responses. Show all posts

Monday, 22 May 2017

Essay Writing Style Advice


WAFFLE AND PADDING: Don’t make a great essay

Don’t use superfluous words, phrases or sentences. If a sentence means the same thing with a word taken out, take it out. The same applies to whole phrases and sentences within the wider context of a paragraph. Using words and phrases which don’t add anything to what you’re saying will mean that your examiners will conclude that (a) you don’t have enough to say to meet the required essay length, and that (b) you are trying to hide this by means of a slow, repetitive and boring writing style. Which is not clever.


The left hand column contains 250% more words than the right-hand column, but it contains 0% more information. Examiners spot this kind of thing.

Furthermore, by not inflating the essay with space-filling nonsense, the writer of the right-hand column has got room to show their understanding of the subject by expanding on further points: what did Lil Ze do? Why might he be seen as power-crazed, or influential? How has he demonstrated his personal power? In other words, there is more room for lots of analysis, which is good news.

Good Essay Writing

Essay writing is a difficult skill to grasp, and sometimes people get bogged down in learning a 'formula’ and try to produce a perfect essay regardless of what the question is.

Plan Plan Plan

• Bullet point your main points;

• number those bullet points;

• associate them with pieces of evidence from your case studies or film/TV texts;

Essential features of a ‘good’ essay
  • A logical argument; once you have decided what the ‘answer’ is, you need to prove your answer in relation to a question or statement. 
  • A clear structure where the reader can ‘follow’ you through the essay – if you plan (numbering your points), you can ensure that each point is linked and will flow to create a smooth transition between your points.
  • An argument based on close textual reading. All of your ideas should stem from the case studies from class and your own wider reading/viewing; this will ensure that your comments are relevant, if they closely link back to a relevant piece of evidence.
  • An awareness of texts as ‘constructs’ – the creation of resources based on a series of deliberate choices.
  •  Equally you need to consider context; how contemporary audiences and producers differ from those in the past.

FM4 - Urban Stories: Strengthening Exam Responses

Exam Responses: Guidance 

  • Developing more thorough responses to exam questions is a key skill that needs to be developed in preparation for the exam. 
  • Below are sample paragraphs of A and D grade responses to an Urban Stories question from the January 2012 paper. 
  • These highlight the contrasts in content, detail and discussion that is required to get the highest grade possible. 
  • Strengthening your exam skills and technique to create better responses is not difficult if you can recognise your weaknesses and change your approach to answering questions from a more critical perspective rather than largely descriptive.

(Question 5.)
Compare the different ways in which conflict between the poor and the powerful are represented in the films you have studied for this topic?  

'D' grade response

The early sequences of the film are set post-riot when we see the destruction of Hubbert's gym and the vandalism of police cars by Said it is clear that there is obvious conflict between poor and powerful. The police have also killed someone and Vinz's readiness to go and kill a police officer to get even clearly demonstrates how conflict is rife between people and authority, and how they resent those in power. The unrest and continuation of the riots helps visualise the unhappiness that prevails in the projects and the readiness of people to change it shows how they want to be recognised and helped.

Comments
Lacks detail - has a tendency to generalise - lacks film language - fails to discuss wider issues

'A' grade response

With the use of black and white stock footage of the riots in the title sequence the audience are made aware that conflict is a key issue from the start. The grittiness of the style exemplifies the themes of conflict in French culture of 'Liberty, equality and fraternity' in mid 90's Paris and the way that the 3 main characters express contrasting attitudes to dominant social values. A particularly powerful character is Vinz who represents 'liberty' in the narrative; he is seen displaying power in the scene when he talks to himself in the mirror in a mid-shot and adopts De Niro's posturing from 'Taxi Driver'. His lack of any 'true' identity though suggests that he is a poor character struggling to gain respect from the society that wishes to exclude or devalue his participation in French society.   

Comments
Includes detail - does not generalise - uses film language - discusses wider issues - is confident


Strong Exam Responses:
  • Include detail
  • Don't generalise
  • Use film language
  • Discuss wider contexts
  • Are written with confidence
  • Understand that film is a visual language

FM4 - Single Film Critical Study: Fight Club


'A' Grade Exam Response

Section C – Single Film: Close Critical Study.

“Fight Club uses cinematic means to produce a fantasy which is also a serious exploration of masculinity”. How far does this statement capture your own response to the film?

The cinematic and thematic exploration of the undervalued blue-collar workers of America in “Fight Club” is an expression of the results of the suppression of masculine, animalistic and natural elements within modern society. While viewing the film the consideration the audience makes alongside the protagonist “Jack” (whose identity is questionable) appears to be questioning whether it is right to fight against this society of anti-masculine individuals who strive for materialism is really an emotional struggle.

We see that Jack experiences the consumerism of society while he is struggling with insomnia (created by the addiction to materialistic items in his apartment) through the sequence are fast-paced close-ups of popular items such as Starbucks cups, Crispy Creme Doughnuts and moreover a shot of his American dollars. These are noticeably crumpled and not at all patriotic with the logos not facing the framing. This focus upon materialism suggests a masculinity dealing with the feminine love of shopping coupled with the anonymity that American city dwelling brings. The idea that this could be anywhere in America is suggested with a memorable close up of stickers bearing “Hello. My name is _____” that evoke a response of loss of direction and identity within the audience. The anonymity and IKEA-catalogue based sequences we see Jack experience in his hallucinations are also a possible schizophrenic embodiment of this lack of any true identity or even his individuality hinting that arguably his importance as a man is being tested.


“Fight Club” embodies the idea of Nietzsche: the idea of a superman being possible is alluded to in the ever-repetitive doppelganger/split-persona of Tyler appearing in a subliminal flicker at the side of the frame throughout the first few scenes. This demonstrates the power that Tyler has over Jack’s mind, and it gets ever more present as the film progresses. It becomes more apparent when we see him in a tracking shot at the airport on an escalator, almost as if the camera shows a preference to following his movements rather than Jack's. This is because we see this side of the masculinity of the main characters split personality being the alpha male, also displayed when the camera tracks his movements from behind and in front as he is surrounded by a crowd in the basement. “Project Mayhem”, the needless fight of violence and terror, is powered by this dominant figure, giving the audience clues that this individual does not let himself be owned by possessions unlike Jack, and regards himself as his own.

Also seen in the masculinity of the postmodern traits of the film is the reference to a rape scene in “A Clockwork Orange”, as the eerily similar, exaggerated disorientation of angle of Tyler after beating up government officials is reminiscent of a more sinister, evil scene from a film about anarchy. This instils a sense of fear in the spectator, as the masculinity of this man appears to be turning into something more power-hungry and fascist. The intertextual reference to 'A Clockwork Orange' also confirms the postmodern significance of this film as it generates so many questions but ultimately and superficially fails to answer them.

The film also displays a radical array of misogynistic traits through the character of Marla, an anagram of the word “alarm” and met with the sound of sirens and non-diegetic influences of danger. This gives us the idea that the main character Jack is so terrified by this femme-fatale and disturbed by her appearance that his masculinity is challenged. In a neo-noir style, we see the framing of Marla introduced sinisterly via shadow and with her hat obscuring half of her face dominating the screen, she also gives the impression of power as it convinces us through the low-angle. Her character is also, while present during a scene in which the self-help group has to reflect and meditate, blurred in the background, while Jack thinks when we are catapulted into the frantic hallucination of Jack in a cool-blue icy cave, in his head, is interrupted by Marla smoking (that demonstrates further the hybrid of noir genre incorporated), she is clearly more dominant. It's as if she is the masculine one, she uses the word “slide” and this dialogue perhaps provokes the idea of Jack’s deterioration leading from here into the audience’s mind. When we next see her in the crosscut back to the church-style environment, it is Jack who is blurred and unimportant.


The narrative also relies on its use of cinematography to relay certain ideas through stylistic and mise-en-scene elements. Almost pornographically shot in a grotesque way is the footage of Jack turning up to his office beaten and bloody, with close-ups of his bruises after his decline into fighting that suggests that the main character has traded his addiction of self-help groups and materialism for the exhilaration of fighting as a form of release. The film also closely explores elements of homosexuality by referencing the experimental style of directors like Kenneth Anger, as we see that the fetishising of objects and improving the body of the men has elements that arise in “Fight Club”. It could be suggested that Jack is in love with the idea of Tyler, and therefore we are greeted with the notion that he is in fact homosexual or may have deep emotional struggles with such tendencies.

Furthermore, the response at the Viennese Film Festival to the film was an angry one of shock and concern over the films fascist, Nazi style links. The sequence in which we see Tyler and Jack stealing a liposuction factory’s human fat and processing it into soap to sell to the rich delivers a haunting message that there are still Nazi-style thoughts born of a generation in need of a disciplinary style of life to stop their masculinity going downhill. The cinematic means used to portray Jack’s early obsession with self-help groups, such as shot-reverse-shot from his close up face centred in the middle of the frame looking solemn, and then to a list of self-help groups not unlike a religious scroll, back to his face, and paired with organ, church style non-diegetic sound express the vulnerability of his addictive nature. This foreshadows his steady decline into being open to fighting and causing mayhem because of his easy transfixion’s with things.


Furthermore, the theme of gender confusion is embodied in the role of Bob, an ex-fighter who was once an alpha male, now resorting to crying at a self-help group and suffering from testicular cancer that physically and mentally feminises him. The viewer’s response is an automatic pity when Jack uses ironic dialogue that injects a hybrid of comedy into the film and we feel sorry for Bob. This emotive response is also strong in our fear that Jack will continue to gradually deteriorate as we see him jeering and fighting alongside the “Project Mayhem” gang – the division between Tyler, the alpha male, and Jack, the less superior character by means such as a phone booth window, trees, furniture and other characters suggest a fighting battle between Jack and his other persona. Because we see this vulnerability in Jack that lacks the usual American ego of a masculine male, we see that the masculinity he craves and worships is in fact slightly evil.

FM4 - Spectatorship - Experimental and Expanded Film/Video

'A' Grade Exam Response

Section B – Experimental and Expanded Film/Video

How has your experience of experimental and expanded film/video liberated your sense of what film spectatorship can be?

Admittedly my initial reaction to experimental film embodied exactly its catalyst behind the creation of it: my viewing as a spectator was an uneasy one, because I was not being told how to think or react to it. Without the body of work consisting of simple techniques such as back-story to hint to how I should perceive the genre, or in many cases dialogue, it left me bereft of the usual mainstream or even independent spectatorship of film I was used to that provided clues to how I should receive the films.

In the case of Andy Warhol’s experimental body of work, I suddenly began to appreciate the poetic relationship between visual and sound that is not always distinct in less avant-garde films, as I found that they were more of a feeling than a narrative. The 1966 film “Chelsea Girls” opposed the sanitized, deeply censored era of the time with its references to sex that the film industry ignored normally. This film, with its revolutionary split-screen techniques furthered the cinematic progress irreversibly, as did his film “Sleep”. With six hours of a man asleep shot in monochrome black and white stock that later influenced a film of David Beckham asleep, I found it refreshing how Warhol dodged categorization by pairing very “highbrow” films reminiscent of the type found in an art-house with utter trash cinema, the very epitome of pop culture. For his lack of snobbish outlook, I appreciated the concept and feel of his films exceptionally.


On the other hand, a film I did not enjoy was Kenneth Anger’s “Scorpio Rising”. I could see that the fetish of objects displayed to the audience through the tracking of items on a table had later influenced the visual elements of “Taxi Driver”. I could understand that with its energetic pace and hidden hints of homosexuality, its underground success in the 60s was part of a revolution in cinema that could not have progressed without in some ways being taboo. Perhaps the problem that I found was that the spectator was addressed too vaguely, too much in a culture of highbrow for me to fully appreciate while viewing.

I did find that the linear narrative of “Food” by Svankmajer, with its eerie addressing of themes such as consumerism, materialism and cannibalism easier to view, perhaps because, even if it gave me an unflattering sense of the human race being like machines, it still evoked some emotion.

Likewise, David Lynch’s “Eraserhead”, inspired by his dull and lifeless time in Philadelphia, gave me a nightmarish feel through the almost lazy pace of the film, non-personal mise-en-scene within his grey apartment and setting of an industrial, abandoned zone that had connotations of disfigurement. The strong elements of male sexual imagery with the worm at the beginning spookily similar to the idea of sperm and the theme of irresponsible sex leading to the mutant baby made me shudder. Furthermore, the minimal dialogue that suddenly collapsed when Henry said, “where have you been?” strengthened my reaction as the spectator wholly because it was the lack of speech leading to it that heightened its anguish. This film may have directed me wondering negatively behind the purpose of life, but it did evoke a matter of playing on my mind afterwards because of its haunting nature.

I found that in experimental cinema, stop-motion film was my least favourite, as I doubted its ability to suggest neither meaning nor reaction out of me, perhaps because the connotations that lie with me as a contemporary viewer are inspired by Keane’s “Bedshaped” music video, and I would only watch that and appreciate it because of its audio.

Enjoyable films such as “Koyaanisqatsi”, referencing Warhol’s breakthrough in post-modernism during the technique of filming people gazing hauntingly into the camera, breaking the fourth wall resulted in me expanding my knowledge on how cinema progressed with such avant-garde cinematic and thematic techniques. In contrast, whereas “Koyaanisqatsi” took a thoughtful few years between 1975 and 1982 to produce, I found “Bodysong” entirely slow-paced and devoid of the same meaning. Whereas “Koyaanisqatsi” had used the relationship between visual and sound in a manner that poetically embraced the rhythm of classical music, “Bodysong” dealt with random but similar images that didn’t fit together quite as well. For instance, the footage (that was found in archives rather than purposely filmed) displayed childbirth, something that is seen to be beautiful, in a grotesque way, and then went on to noisily expose themes such as bullying with clips from over the world. Having become annoyed with the off-beat, childlike repetition of the music that I was not accustomed to as a viewer, I noticed that everything I was seeing at the beginning were things not to be seen with the naked eye. Although I appreciated the concept behind it, I could not help but challenge the mundane and boring style by wondering if perhaps the audience does not wish to see these things usually left free of exposure. Regardless, it did evoke a reaction.


However, the linear narrative of “La Jetee”, which I found pleasing to experience as a spectator accustomed to plot and dialogue, was altogether put together in a surrealist style I recognised as someone who is used to mainstream viewing, and it perhaps did not play on my mind as much as the others due to its philosophical approach being engulfed by narrative. Whereas in the other cases, I had to really think about the films.


Finally, my favourite of all to watch was the 1992 film “For Marilyn” by Stan Brakhage. This film, filled with fast-paced shots of beautifully placed framing, mixed rhythm and light to demonstrate aesthetic enjoyment as a whole. As the other films had displayed asynchronous sound in some cases, or limitations of dialogue, I found that my response to this film as a viewer was extraordinarily liberating, as the silence of the work meant that the fleeting, rhythmic flickers of hand painted stills were the music instead. After enjoying the techniques used that involved the images to be ran through a camera reel for artistic effect, I could only say that my response to this type of experimental film blew my mind in that I had to think for myself rather than be spoon-fed. The liberation of my sense of what film spectatorship usually requires such as a plot, narrative, dialogue, sound and smooth editing gave me a sense to be free of these ideals and respond just how I felt suited it.

FM4 - Urban Stories - 'A' Grade Exam Response: City of God/La Haine

'A' Grade Exam Response

Section A – Urban Stories: Power, Poverty and Conflict.

“Compare the different ways in which conflict between the poor and the powerful are represented in the films you have studied in this topic”

The difference in thematic stylistic and cinematic conventions regarding the films “City of God” and “La Haine” have attributes of representation roles of characters that contrast one another.

For instance, the role of “L’il Ze” in “City of God” represents the possession of having power in the world of crime within his favela, as we see slowly throughout that his dominance is enhanced by giving his framing more thought and his angle being higher than others. This character is high-up in the world of the poor, but in the world of the powerful he is miniscule – we see the effective contrast of setting being close as the favelas and topsy-turvy, unkempt position of the handmade houses demonstrated with a binary opposition of how close-by but out of reach, the rest of the richer, more industrial Brazil is. The film takes place over the space of a few decades, beginning with a yellowish, warm sepia editing that basks the open space of the poor settlers in the early 60s and darkening into a more dangerous tone in the 70s and 80s, giving off a feel of gloominess and expressing the theme of having no escape. Colder colours in mise-en-scene such as grey and blue are used in comparison to the earlier warmth. The palette of vivid colours displayed that range of extremities of cold and warm are perhaps the only embodiment of the true cultural Brazilian nature of a jungle type, natural world.

In “La Haine”, however, the film takes place over a space of 24 hours – a short tie frame as if to portray a small portrait of the culture at the time. Also with a use of black and white stock that convinces the audience of its grittiness, the themes of the French “liberty, equality and fraternity” are expressed to us with three main characters. A particularly strong character, Vinz, who represents “liberty”, is portrayed in a mirror at the beginning shot in a similar style to “Taxi Driver”, when De Niro’s character talks to himself in the mirror. The reference of this film, added to the similar “skinhead” look, gives the audience a sense of the French culture being less influential in this film than the western American conventions. This lack of French culture suggests an anonymity of the characters, presenting Vinz as a poor individual who is living in a society in which has no connotations of the language he speaks. Rap music is also incorporated within the beginning sequence as a strong suggestion of a focus on this being anywhere in the world, as if perhaps the emotions conveyed here are global and this swings the audience into the meaning behind the film. Rather than accepting “La Haine” as a French film, because it has little references its own culture, the audience must instead focus on the conflict the poor face against the privileged all around the world, reinforcing its effect dramatically.


More differences are the amount of characters to focus on. In “City of God”, a voiceover suggests a story-like anecdote behind each random character that the camera pans fluently, suggestive that the main issues with power in the favelas stem from the way they all live on top of one another within a vast population. In contrast, the focus on three main characters in “La Haine” gives the audience an expectancy of self-contained narratives of each one of them, and their struggle is that there are not enough of them to make a difference against the corrupt police. The camerawork is also focused on coming out of the back of each dominant role’s head as their side of the story is focused on, linking the audience to the character emotionally and framing them centrally within their surroundings.

Similarities arise in both films, however in the two urban stories we are met with the representation of the films meaning by a smaller embedded narrative. This is seen during the beginning sequence of “City of God” that has a hysterically panning camera tracking the chasing of a chicken about to be slaughtered. With the diegetic audio of evil laughter in the background and a hurried, terrified escape failing, it is with this sense of despair and frustration that the audience comes to understand the display of non-escapism in the film, and alludes to the characters being hit by a glass ceiling every time they try and break free of drugs and crime.

This small story is also posed similarly in “La Haine”, through the minor character of an old man relating how, when he was a prisoner of war, pride stopped a fellow man’s life from being saved as he was too embarrassed by the falling down of his trousers to jump onto the train. This, intensified by a mirror reflection of the three main characters silently listening, tempts the audience via framing to assume the story means more than is let on. This theme of pride preventing courage is central to the way the characters are represented in Paris, in a reverse dolly-shot that blurs them from being in lace with the city as they appear to be lost amongst a rich world but are too proud to try and be like these people, as their background also prevents this.


The films also have the themes of unsustainable romance, with failure to be in love and nurture a relationship seen in liaison of the poverty and upbringing of the social circles. “City of God” portrays women being raped, mistreated and marginalised, with the main character unable to keep his girlfriend due to drugs, and “La Haine” presents us with a scene in which the three characters attempt to flirt with women of higher class, resulting in shaky camera angles as they fail and lose their footing. Altogether the films provide the audience with a portrait of the conflicting barriers between the underclass and the rich that provoke emotional response.

Wednesday, 10 May 2017

FM4 - Single Film - 'A' Grade Exam Response: Critical Study: Fight Club


'Explore the contribution of visual style to the overall themes of Fight Club.'

Fight Club’s visual elements most definitely support its overall themes. I am going to be discussing certain themes in which I feel visually contribute to the narrative/themes.

Consumerism is a big theme in Fight Club, it could be argued that the need, and pressure to conform to modern day society, and spend a lot of time, money and effort buying and fantasizing over consumer goods could be responsible for Jack’s mental illness. At the beginning of the film there are lots of extreme close-ups of Starbucks, Krispy Crème branded packaging, which are American food and beverages but now also seen as fashion icons. It is fashionable to be seen walking down the street with a Starbucks coffee, or decorating your home in Ikeas latest catalogue. The scene where jack is in his condo is extremely visually effective, as the scene takes on an advertising style showing lots of items that he desired, and perhaps have a positive effect on aspects of his deranged life.

As Jack starts deteriorating, there are flashes (in the office by the photocopier and in the doctors surgery) of Tyler. These can be easily missed but also add to the idea that as Jack is deteriorating, Tyler is coming into the picture, The visual style almost acts as Jack’s head, like it is weakening for the audience to see. Jack’s addiction to new furniture and constant buying in order to better himself doesn’t fulfill his need to sleep, and faced with insomnia, finds refuge in support groups. These support groups are visually stylized in order to find comfort, which Jack does. There is also a visual representation of Christ. When jack cries on Bob’s top he leaves a mark in the face of God, which invites religious terms and imagery into the picture.

I think the visual elements of the film also show a misogynistic viewpoint of Marla. Visually, she always looks dowdy and gaunt, and in terms of framing she often dominates the whole screen. She is seen as the ‘Femme Fatale’ and the reason for dominating the screen could suggest that she is trying to take over, and continue to steal men’s masculinity within the film which may be the reason she is viewed negatively and shot in dominating positions. Marla coming to the support groups ruins it for Jack, so she could be seen as one step towards Jacks nialism in which he destroys himself, and becomes Tyler.

Tyler is always displayed flamboyantly, in adventurous clothes, and acts as the alpha male in a sense. Therefore I think the visuals contribute positively towards him, and enforce the soon becoming homoerotic style between him and Jack.

Jack/Tyler start up the fight club, and visually the look of the fights and the bare knuckle fighting could enforce the homoerotic argument, and show post modernism/hybridity as this use of genre (gliding shots, and in the closet sexuality) has been seen in experimental films by Kenneth Anger. There are also other examples of the use of hybridity when Tyler enters Marla’s room, to find a sex toy on the table, mirroring A Clockwork Orange.

One example of a visually powerful scene, was when Project Mayhem had the members of parliament on the floor in the toilet and there is a point of a view shot showing Tyler from a disorientated angle. This is also another example of hybridity as the same framing of the rape scene was used in A Clockwork Orange.

Irony was also used to further visual style. In the scene where Jack goes round to Marla’s flat to check for a lump in her breast, he leaves and on the wall behind him it says ‘I like myself’-which is ironic as he clearly doesn’t and subconsciously created another person in his head to make up for that.

Lots of visual styles are used in the film, such as advertising, and that of documentary. When Jack introduces Tyler, he is talking to the camera in a documentary kind of way that re-enforces a new style to the film.

When Jack enters his ‘cave’ in his cancer support group Marla is seen saying ‘slide’ this can be viewed as a misogynistic action, as from then on Jack slides downhill. Another important theme of the film is recycling. Marla recycles clothes, and Tyler recycles human fat in order to make soap. This theme runs throughout the film as Jack even kind of recycles himself for Tyler, the bigger, better version of him, and that’s made apparent in this quote ‘I look like you want to look, I talk like you want to talk, I fuck like you want to fuck’. Jack has recycled himself into Tyler as well as recycling fight club into project mayhem.

Thursday, 30 March 2017

FM4 - Spectatorship - Experimental and Expanded Film/Video


Experimental film/video works are often perceived as difficult. How far are your experiences as a spectator in this topic?

Admittedly, the first few experimental films I watched embraced entirely what the true catalysts behind them were: that they were very hard to get my head around, because of the bowdlerized purging of everything vulgar being sanitized. Even without the excuse of growing up in the 60’s when directors such as Warhol and Anger being much more of shock than a modern approach nowadays, I found myself uneasy without the usual backstory and skeletal frame of past events that help my understanding of the motivation behind the film come to life. I found that the films I was watching were “high-brow”, the type to find in an art-house, and yet these were the films that influenced cinema irreversibly.

I suddenly found that Andy Warhol, whose trash cinema “Sleep” which involved six hours of the sleeping of a man shot through a static camera using grainy monochrome film, was in fact a very dry and witty persona within his body of work. His interest in the concept of pointing the camera at people may have put me at unease slightly, but in essence this was repeated in the later experimental film (1982) Koyaanisqatsi, which revealed the globalised, mechanical world through the medium of many layers of film taken over years. I found that if such a beautiful body of work that took more than six years to complete could consider Warhol as not as pretentious as initially thought, so could I. I found that his major movement in avant-garde cinema within the film “Sleep” demonstrated in fact many changes from the camera angles, establishing its concept that he could not just walk away from the camera and leave it there, in effect dismissing the mainstream cinema that I am used to. Not only did this inspire art-house cinema but we can see it in culture today, such as the filming of David Beckham asleep. Warhol provided a radical shift in thinking about the nature of art with his 1966 movie “Chelsea Girls”, a revolutionary film technically as it used split-screen editing and mentioned sex, something that would have shocked the audience back then but obviously didn’t affect me as much as I have become, through mainstream cinema, desensitised to that. I also was refreshed by the idea that Warhol was not snobbish in his approach, not as “high-brow” as I thought, as there is little distinction between his avant-garde exterior of pushing the boundaries and the way he defied categorization by throwing “pop” culture of trash and meaningless things into the mix.

Someone whose films gave me the feeling of unease was Kenneth Anger, in his 1964 film “Scorpio Rising” particularly. Contextually shown at underground clubs and dealing with homosexuality in a “fetish” like way, I could see that he was revolutionary. I could see that his tracking shots of objects on the table have been referred to in many other films, one being “Taxi Driver” so his influence is obvious. Cinema in the 50’s was more ideological of everyone being normal and the same, whereas this film, connected with drugs and a collage-like, pastiche of borrowed genres such as fame, popular culture, art, the American dream and more, was more visual than narrative. But the film did not provoke appreciation within me, although I could admit that it was pushing the boundaries exceptionally – perhaps I did not find it structured in a way that created meaning without further studies and referential insight.

On the other hand, my favourite of all experimental film directors was Stan Brakhage. Particularly in his film “For Marilyn” (1992), I regarded him as someone who possessed the ability to conceive the idea of both the concept that distances the audience from the film so regularly in experimental cinema, and being able to materially and thematically push the boundaries of cinematic film to reveal universal qualities within its deep layers. The musically structured aesthetic of light moving in time to a pattern unheard as it is silent, paired with fleeting images of painted glass, took film in a new direction. Whereas many of the experimental films used asynchronous sound tactics to portray the feeling of the poetic relationship between sound and image, I liked the way that my response to the beautiful images was entirely through visuals.

The multi layered dimension effect of the complex, non-linear narratives were often hard to grasp, which is why I found the film “La Jetee” more easy to watch and aesthetically pleasing. However, it did not convey strong emotion as a lot of thought went into the narrative, whereas films like the Quay Brothers stop-motion body of work gave me an uneasy feeling and a response of boredom, which is, regardless of preference, a stronger response.

The 1977 film “Eraserhead” by David Lynch, with its infrequent dialogue, was more emotive than any of them, conveying to me more anguish than films without minimal speech as the words from Henry to Mary “Where have you been?” haunted me into the tension of the atmosphere more effectively. Henry’s perspective filled with male sexual imagery such as the grotesque reproduction of the sperm and the comprehension of the consequences of irresponsible sex (the mutant baby), teamed with a non-personal mis-en-scene that embodied the abandoned industrial zone Lynch felt inspired by Philadelphia to create, and the questioning of a simple existence at the film’s leisurely and nightmarish pace, captivated me. Undoubtedly, it was not an enjoyable experience, but nonetheless it was one that replayed in my mind.

The film “Bodysong”, taking something perceived as beautiful like childbirth and turning it entirely on its head, consisting of no dialogue and not being given a way of being told how to read it, gave me the thought that most people do not like not knowing how to think. All of these clips are things that we cannot see with the naked eye, and perhaps that is the reason behind the film, because most people do not want to. In comparison to Koyaanisqatsi’s artistic and thoughtful creation, this footage was found footage, and exploring life as it happens everywhere in its pastiche way. It was a slow-paced film at first, which I think was perhaps part of my reason for rejecting it as a film, as it dealt with themes of bullying, love, family and teen trends too similarly to be interesting and quite conflicting to agree to an opinion on.

Finally, Svankmajer’s 1972 “Food” film was witty, somewhat enjoyable and very much narrative-based, with the concept of humans becoming vending machines, the product of what they create, and exploring themes of cannablism to materialism, devoured by mechanical, non-emotive lives and pouring with rich images was as haunting as it was peculiar.

FM4 - Urban Stories: 'A' Grade Exam Response: City of God/La Haine


'What is the importance of cinematography and/or editing in communicating issues of power, poverty and conflict in the films you have studied for this topic?'

I am going to be writing about three Urban Story films, these being ‘Once Were Warriors’, ‘City of God’, and ‘La Haine’. Although these films are all extremely different in terms of visual, and contextual styles, I feel they somewhat relate and send powerful, strong and moving messages to the audience. Urban Stories films are like no other, they are made directly to tell a story, which holds a lot of truth about political, social, and cultural goings-on in certain countries. I am going to discuss in this examination O.W.W (Once Were Warriors, set in New Zealand) C.O.G (City of God, set in Brazil, Rio) and La Haine (set in France and Paris). Within this discussion I am going to write about how I think editing and cinematography communicates issues of power, poverty and conflict in the previously mentioned films.

The opening scene of City of God is extremely powerful visually. The scene shows harsh cutting shots of knives sharpening, already giving the audience a hint that the film is going to be about violence, and living on the edge of a knife. This editing is harsh and choppy. Which goes, and suits the general style of the film. The opening scene is about a gang of hoods chasing a chicken, and again there are sharp extreme close ups of the chicken. Indicating to me that maybe humans are seen as poultry, easily disposed and killed in cold blood. Another powerful opening scene is in O.W.W. The first shot of the film is a beautiful field, which I would associate with New Zealand’s greenland, and how it used to be. However, the shot of this landscape quickly pans outs and it is just an advertisement on the billboard. The shot then goes to Beth, a main character in O.W.W with a shopping trolley. The difference between the two shots couldn’t be more opposing. In the scene with Beth, the colours are browns, dark greens and greys, all very earthy colours, and a special filter was used to make sure of this. Just by the use of colour, I got the representation of poverty, and by the surrounding sets. By showing the picture of ‘Old New Zealand’ then getting back to reality with the opening scene shows what New Zealand use to be like, in the Maori Culture, before western countries took over, and starved the country, and culture of their life and colour, leaving it with nothing, except growing poverty as the Maori Culture soon turned to drugs and crime, and drink. The film La Haine is shot in black and white, and I feel that this also represents lack of colour in life, and the oppression that people in the projects (who were promised employment) were facing. Time is another editing technique I picked up on, and it plays a very important part in the three films.

C.O.G is based over three decades, starting with the sixties, ending with the eighties. Drug use is a big catalyst to the crime rates and danger the favela’s hold. After doing additional research on the social background of the film, I came across interviews of actual drug lords, who openly admitted that selling drugs and working for drug dealers ultimately gives you power, and places you above other locals, and earns you a good deal of respect. So the majority of people living in Brazilian Favela’s opt to work with instead of against it, as it will give them power, as the extent of the problem even manipulates the police, and is a way out of poverty, as working for drug lords will probably earn you more money than going out and getting a real job.

The editing in C.O.G backs up the power that drug dealing gives people, and it is clearly portrayed throughout the narrative, for example; in the first decades of City of God, the general feel of the film was mellow and relaxed. This was shown by long shots, and there wasn’t any jump cuts or quirky shots to indicate otherwise. The reason for this is that the most popular drug around, that was being commonly used in Brazil in the 60s/70s was marijuana, which gives users a relaxed, mellow and usually happy high. However, as the film progressed cocaine took over, it was being more commonly dealt and started to control people. The editing I feel showed me this as the scenes were a lot faster, jumpier, and the cuts were harsh, the style of the film seemed unsettled, like the effects of cocaine. And things were getting worse in the favela’s as cocaine was becoming more prominent. Another example of how time is shown is through the cinematography in both O.W.W and La Haine. There was a calender on the wall that often came between Jake and Beths frame whenever they were together in the kitchen. Time is a reoccurring motif in La Haine, as the whole film is set in 24 hours, and there is a reoccurring ‘ticking’ noise throughout the film. The way time is represented in all three of these films communicates conflict with the audience as if there is something about to happen/ take place.

A good example of how poverty is shown, and how it is communicated through cinematography in Once Were Warriors is the animalistic cinematography. After the horrific scene where Jake beats Beth and rapes her, there is a close up of dogs sorting through rubbish bins, trying to eat. This represents how the western countries have left New Zealand with so little, to have nothing, like the dogs and this is maybe why Jake feels the need to use violence on his wife, as the animal is coming out of him. There are more references to animals throughout the film, like Jake wearing leather, and Beth wearing snakeskin dresses. These animalistic references scream out poverty as, like the animals, they once again have nothing.

There is a scene in O.W.W which I think clearly conveys, and represents the power that the west has had on New Zealand. This is where Buggie is stealing a car, and is held down by a white policeman trying to arrest him, showing power through framing and cinematography, and also indicating that white west have more power over Maori Culture.

Another example of conflict being communicated throughout cinematography is in La Haine, where the gun comes between Vinz and Hubert, and always in the middle of the frame, creating conflict.

I think the editing and cinematography creates and adds to conflict, poverty and power in the feel of the film, and puts across issues that the narrative may not in a subtle, but noticeable way. I feel that the editing and cinematography in all three films worked to their advantage narratively, contextually and aesthetically.

'A' Grade Exam Responses: Urban Stories

'A' Grade Exam Response

Compare the attitudes to poverty conveyed in the films you have studied for this topic?

When looking at the genre of Urban Stories, it is clear to see that a major theme that runs throughout each film is poverty. The main films I will be looking at will be, Once We’re Warriors, La Haine and City of God. I will be comparing the 3 films with the idea of poverty in mind and how their situation and attitudes are presented. In the majority of the films of this genre, they can come across as having quite an, understandably, pessimistic attitude towards their situation. Take for example, Tamohari’s, Once We’re Warriors. We can see right from the beginning of this film that the attitudes of the characters are very negative. The first time we meet Jake, we discover that he has been ‘laid off’ this immediately suggests a tough financial situation for the family involved. The mise-en-scene of his performance when he eventually admits this to his wife comes across as quite casual, this may also suggest that this is the first time it has happened, and again leading the audience to believe this is a reoccurring situation for the family. This negative attitude is something that is also followed through City of God. However, it is portrayed in a different way. Despite the lack of money available to family through legitimate jobs, from a very young age each character does their very best to begin earning (most commonly through drug sales etc). Right at the beginning of the film, we hear the diegetic sound of a knife being sharpened, this could be suggestive of how the residents of the favelas are constantly living their lives on a knife edge, unsure of what may happen next. This idea, however, is in complete contrast to Urban Story, Chungking Express. This film is far more optimistic of the situation their characters are in, take character Faye for example. Despite the repetition in her life, shown through the repetition of the song she listens to, we often see her singing, this makes her character come across as quite happy. Her curiosity is another suggestion that she is still ‘alive’ when seizing the opportunity to take ‘633’s’ apartment keys. With each visit Faye begins to try and brighten up the apartment, this brighter mise-en-scene again leads towards optimism and making the most of the situation.

When looking at La Haine with this idea of pessimism towards poverty in mind, Kassovitz portrays this somewhat differently to the other films. I feel that each of the 3 main characters has a completely different attitude towards their situation, despite the fact that the narrative joins them together with the same revenge filled plot in mind, each represent a different aspect of it. It could be suggested that they may be culturally represented as Vinz being “liberty” (the most pessimistic), Hubert being “Equality” (the most positive) and Said” being “Fraternity” (each part of the French flag). We can see Said as ‘Fraternity’ as he is often centrally framed between the other 2 characters, attempting to find common ground between conflicting characters, Vinz and Hubert. We meet Hubert in a burnt down gym, which he was trying to create a boxing club with. I feel that this presents him as a more optimistic character as he is trying to make the best of his situation. We also see his mother asking him for money for his younger sisters school textbook, this shows us how is plays a fatherly role in his family, he takes responsibility for things. (A common ground between each character, the lack of a father) This is in complete contrast to Vinz’s character – the most westernised of the 3. This is shown through the mise-en-scene of his bedroom (e.g. poster of Marilyn Monroe and famous wrestlers.) He also quotes a lot of Scorsese, “Are you talking to me?” – Taxi Driver. This is also where his violent/revengeful personality could be suggested to stem from.



I feel that La Haine has the most negative outcome of all the films. A commonality of each of the films is the desperate attempt to flee the area and the poverty the characters are brought up in. The Favelas in City of God, the Project in La Haine and the family home and control of Jake in Once We’re Warriors. La Haine shows just how impossible the French cultural situation is. This is shown through a number of techniques. One of the most striking is the change in camera lenses when the 3 characters leave the Project and head for central Paris. The background becomes blurred suggesting they are completely out of the depth and are not at all comfortable in their new surrounds. Of course, they end up back at the Project. In City of God, however, despite the initial struggle, the character of Rocket manages to get himself away from that life of poverty and uncertainty by taking advantage of his photography skills and his knowledge and familiarity of the Favela. He still shoots but unlike the rest his childhood acquaintances, it’s with a camera and not a gun. This does not however, create a more positive lifestyle for the people of the favelas and their situation is now more publicised through the media. Once We’re Warriors takes a completely different route to this kind of situation. As it is not a place the characters are trying to escape, it is a very dominating lifestyle they are kept in by Husband/Father, Jake. It takes something as serious as Graces (daughter) suicide to set them free.

It would seem to me, that a very negative attitude is generally displayed when it comes to cultural clashes and poverty, in relation to these particular films. I feel this also comes through in media representation of it also. I think if this discussion were to be deepened, this aspect of time would need to be questioned. Is this attitude simply because of the time that is portrayed? I think, with French culture in mind Crack 6T would be a very interesting comparison for La Haine, this films follows a similar structure, 3 young male characters seeking revenge against authority. Also, narrative structure could be looked at? Often being circular narratives. Such as in City of God, we see a scene that appears again towards the end of the films before we begin at the start.

Thursday, 2 March 2017

FM4 - 'A' Grade Exam Responses


'A' Grade Exam Response Guidance

• Answer each question directly/stress the key points
• Use key words from the question: repeatedly throughout
• Make it clear what films will be discussed at the start: directors + year
• Refer directly to key sequences using detailed analysis and film language to refer to key scenes (mise-en- scene/framing/lighting/sound etc)
• Give a ‘personal response’ (ie: for me/ I believe/in my opinion/the second time I watched it/with further viewing)

Summary of Recommendations:
• Answer the question as asked
• Less is sometimes more: structure an argument and choose examples carefully for maximum impact in relation to the question
• Bring macro and micro analysis into this paper; extending on the last point, detailed reference and discussion is always better than general description.